This is a very good story for people who have a weight gain fetish. I myself do not but still thoroughly enjoyed the storyline. I would only suggest that you your self add more to the story and give it more chapters. With more chapters it will attract a lot more professional writers and you won't have to deal with chapters that have bad grammar and spelling. You are a very good writer yourself and I would suggest interacting more by either adding on to this story or creating a new one.
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