An interesting, mysterious poem. It is neat to be inspired to write something from dreams one has had, especially if the dream has stuck with a person for some reason or other. Overall, a poem with a mystery behind it. Nice job.
I like this one a lot. I love the fact that you have taken a concept from Tolkien's work and made it into a poem. It flows very nicely and the rhyme scheme is consistent throughout where it appears. It inspires me to write a poem of my own based on Tolkien's works although I have yet to figure out the theme for it. All in all, great job with this!
Very nice. I don't normally write haiku poems but maybe after reading this I will try! I like the words used, very short and simple, yet profound in a surreal dream-like way. Just like the moon itself.
The title was perfect for this short piece. Moon Song, I like very much. If I had a list of favorite poems on here, this would be among them. Also excellent picture shown, it adds to the quality of this already great piece.
Nice poem, good imagery here. I have a critique for this and that is maybe you should put all one thought/idea on one line, then move on to the next. Like for example, the first line should read "when the thick yellow light of late afternoon" should be on one line. The word afternoon was underneath that. Just my opinion though, a personal preference of mine on how I would write it. Otherwise I like the poem, it has a nice flow to it. Makes one feel the quiet of night almost.
A nice positive poem about the light and beauty of one's soul. it speaks on a level that one person can make a difference, can make the world a better place. I like the part about the pulsating light from an emerging star. To me, this says hope can come from one who is just finding themselves or trying to find their way, like a star that is newly born into its true potential. Hope re-emerging to someone or something that was once lost. I guess this poem can be interpreted in many ways. Overall, very spiritual sounding and uplifting. One thing though, is that the font size and alignment of text is also displayed with your poem, perhaps you can edit that so it does not show? Good job with this.
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