Drugs can open new windows of creativity. They can also shatter them and board them up. I like the idea of drugs as euphoric liars, as well as the choice of words and tone, describing the victim and their assailants. The themes of chasing the high as a endless hell where the demons of drug use plague the victim is well used in this. Good piece.
This is a great crime piece. I love how it all wrapped around at the end. This builds suspense through it's entirety, and gains a great amount of energy considering its weight. I would love to see this one stretched out, maybe into three parts as a novella. Good stuff.
This is a nice piece, which makes me nostalgic about youth, as well as just time in the past.
It's sad that adults often loose their ability to imagine when they come to age. If only creativity grew for all people as time goes on. I believe that the psychic world can be just as powerful as the physical, though its sights are rarely possible to communicate with others about. This inability may be what causes this sad effect.
This is intense and vivid, grotesque even. I'm left somewhat speechless. I'm not sure if this is fiction or not, but regardless it leaves me quite unsettled. Experiences like this are the darkest that human beings can experience, and why someone would put another person through that is beyond me. Unfortunately, it happens. How terrifying a world we live in, where some are so selfish and sick that they would put another person through this sort of experience. Those who survive and keep on living are stronger than most.
Wow, this piece is great. It really motivates me to write more. It doesn't matter whether you write best-selling works or are brilliant entirely. The right reason to write is for the few that will understand what you mean, vibe with your emotion. Even if you are the only one who is touched, it's worth writing. Thank you for this.
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