Very haunting and sad. This is a heart wrenching insight into the soul of the life of a victim turned victomizer. My heart goes out to all those touched by the horrible ravages of child abuse. We must recognize these sins and wrong doings,but never dwell on them too long and let them control our present and future.
Short, but entrancing poem, about the forest, and an awe filled relationship with the magical potential of them. Ah to be lost among the trees, it would be so nice. Well written as well, and exactly the type of poem I'm interested in reading. Keep up the good work!
This story is okay, but I lost connection with it. I couldn't put myself into the story. Technically speaking, the story held together well, but the story lacks depth, I couldn't feel it.
This mirrors the same feelings I have in my life and the connection I have to my love. You have mirrored what is in my heart and have done it in a well constructed and moving way. One of the biggest signs of a great writer is to make their readers feel what they feel, and in this case, bring tears of relief and joy to this reader's eyes. Thank you for this story.
Very moving story, it touched a chord in me. Fantasic, it moved me to tears. I too have had horrible experiences of which I will not express here. Needless to say, life is both painful and precious, and sadly, it oftentimes takes horrible tradgedies for us to fully realize this fact. Well done.
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