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Review of The Amazon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Your poem beautifully written, the imagery really draws the reader to the story. What I got from the poem is how the rise of industry sucks the money and life out of those who desire a simpler life. Thanks for letting me read. I believe there is a typo in the fourth line of the second stanza, word should be world, but I may be wrong
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Review of Love Song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The depth of emotion and the verse itself gives the feel of life's dull knife cutting asunder the ties that bind as we become complacent in life. I truly enjoyed your poem.
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