Death is so awful. I just lost my sister whom I was very close to for most of our lives. Just over the past 2 years or so, things got stressful between us. I didn't know how to mourn her death. I feel guilty because I hadn't said I loved her in years. I'm still crying over the guilt. I miss her so bad and now I'm crying in ways I can't control all the time.
My dad is dying now and tho he has been ill for years we have had warning he's been sick. It doesn't help but it's DEATH and DEATH SUCKS! THANKS for your writing.
I think this is very sweet. This is a wonderful story for someone who was depressed and lonely until they met someone who just by their existence in their life everything has changed for them. Now everything is wonderful and bright.
Personally, I would have added another verse and put in a separation verse, like, now that we have parted.....how do you feel, what has it done to you...UNLESS you are still together.
I don't know if I wrote any comments before but I really understand what you mean. In 2004 I hit my on cement and I now have a TBI (traumatic brain injury). I also suffer from migraine cluster headaches (also known as Suicide headaches). I used to have to leave my job and go to the E.R. and was given shots of morphine and dilauid and was left in the dark to sleep for hours so that the headaches could ease up and I would not be so sick. I now suffer from petimal seizures. (Forgive my spelling if its wrong anywhere). My point is you are SO RIGHT. No one can see our headaches, our brain injuries, or the diabetes, but they should be more compassionate when people tell them of their problems. My place of employment knew of my TBI when they hired me and yet they still counted all these headache problems and E.R. visits against me. I think that was unfair.
I hope u are doing a little better and I wish you my best..
I like what u say about Love... there is so much to say about it, so much that it means and it is so often misunderstood.
Love is infinite and unconditional but so often ABUSED.
That is intense...I've been thinking lately too how I want a drink a lot lately but I just haven't picked it up.
But the story here is one so many live, and the fear of hitting someone scares me to death SOBER, never mind being under the influence. I had many days when I drank and drove under the influence, I could have hurt someone but THANK GOD, I never came close to hurting anyone or anything...
Interesting...
There is often one person we wonder about, how they would feel if we passed. In a way, this writing says it all.
I like it, I wish my ex could read it and get a lesson from it..
I like this, not only the writing but because so often it happens to us in our lives. Many days I have thought of people from my past that I wish I could come across again and to have the luxury of passing them on the road like that must be wonderful.
"life is to short. and it only takes a minute to send a text, or e-mail or even a phone call to say " hey how are you"." I'm thinking about you today". This is just so true... so true and I make sure to send a text to all those important people of my life. I send messages via Face book or Messenger or just via regular Text because I don't want to miss that moment, that one moment that might be the last...
Short and sweet. To the point of the fall weather.
I like the poem but I don't really like fall much.
This poem expresses changes in the lives of kids in school, and weather combination.
I read this and had to giggle because I am scottish. I went on to read the Lyrics Mary Mack to my spouse and we just had such a chuckle because I can imitate the sound of the scot singing the song and it was just kind of fun.
Thanks for the sharing.
Awesome. So many of the words here are some I myself I have written but published elsewhere. There are words I am living to a point, but only some of them. In my life it was not love at first sight but one that doesn't seem to want to die.
I love your poem and my words are a short story that I am almost done with. A forbidden love. A patient who falls in love with their counselor......
Your poem shared a wonderful story, a lover who cannot have the one they want but instead are marrying someone else even tho it isn't who they "really love". It's AMAZING. I love it. Just love it.
I loved the story. So much truth to it in real life. Many men have a problems when women advance quicker than they do, or if they do better at tests, if they study harder etc. Janice had a partner that failed this test so he knew in his mind she too would fail, ha well it didn't happen and it ofetn does not but as stated before alot of men aren't big enough to accept that so I loved the honesty in the story and in comparing it to REAL LIFE. It was a nice story. I would have enjoyed a longer story. :) but I really liked it and don't know what else the author could have done that I didn't already see. I really liked it. Write us a book!!!
I thought this was a good story. I think Philp might have lost his way due to the stress of the funeral. The fact that he fell asleep in the church and everyone just left him there kind of made me wonder tho...
I was confused as to whether Philip was a younger person, mid aged or older and if that too might have affected his memory but again I still liked the story and te fact that when he saw the headstone with his same name on it, he knew he was home...
It was a story with sincerity and sentiment. Nice.
wow...I can relate to the headaches.
I have migraine clusters also after a head injury.
SO intense...So much I can relate to but then you have alot I have not experienced too.
I liked reading this...
great life story so to speak, thanks for sharing.
It is so true how the headaches can cause you to lose a job, a relationship and even a marriage.
The blogs I read looked like a few of the chapters of my life with my ex.
So many of the lines were like they came right from my mouth. I guess its true what they say, someone is really going thru the same thing as you somewhere...
I hope you are moving on and moving forward. I hope the tears are fewer ad the pain not as strong and severe.
I hope your writing is as therapeutic for you as my has been for me. Best wishes for that and the writing.
I like this but I got slightly confused when I got to line 3
Seeing you everyday, it kills
It felt like you missed the word me at the end of it.
Did you or was it just that I thought it should be there?
Then again at this part :
Didn't know someone could be
Would be perfect for you
Seemed like it wasn't quite right....
The rest of it was really good. Flowed so well..
Really hurts when one person loves and the other has moved on.
Been there
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