I feel like this is a good start, but you could flesh out the emotion. A lot of what you say is falling flat. How do these things make you feel? Why don't you love her any more? Do you think it's just because she's not perfect, or is it something else? Where did the chemistry go? Why could she release your inner self? Can you?
I really like the vivid picture your words paint. While the people weren't described in any great detail, the scenery and the various objects, the boats, the obelisk, so on and so forth, were described well enough that I could see them. For such a short story, you did an excellent job conveying the characters and the moods present. This was a great read!
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