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Review of Streets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved this! the rhyme scheme fit right in. Its like a true story of how the world today is and that's what brought me in and interested me. is this how you really feel and what you are going thru or was it based on somebody else life? it was very unique with a great word choice.
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Review of In My Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I didn't really understand the concept in this. It just told us about what he or she sees in her dreams. Well what makes her dream so special? Is he or she in love? Our brushes taken, but not our day? What are their brushes? if they are painting why did they ignore the canvas? Give more details about who the dream is about, and maybe how long he or she has been dreaming. Was the dream ironic to her?
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Review of Stealing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
How does the title relate to the poem? It was very lyrical I actually liked the wordding of it if only i could understand it.
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Review of My First Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
This was a nice poem but there wee alot of gramma errors that made it very hard to understand. I think it could have been better.
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Review of Teasing to Please  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
this was reqally hard to understand. I didnt really get the meaning. More details would be nice!
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Review of I miss...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem reminds me of a story or a song i have read before, I dont feel like it was original at all.Maybe put more details or dont start every line with I miss. try telling why you miss those things.
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Review of ‎01-22-10  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was very sweet and original. it had a very good vocabulary. Although I feel as though its like every other love poem. You didnt really tell us what happened int the story or what the date in the title meant.
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Review of My Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the line "When they want to cry I direct them to my sholder" because there are so many ways you couldve sayed it and it would have sounded cheesy but it sounds so sweet that way. I didnt like how you kept repeating your friends are your life you love your friends etc.
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Review of Silent Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The last line kind of confused me. Is he her silent tears or the reason for them? It seems as if I have read this before I dont think its very original.
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Review of I Miss You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The rhyme scheme was kind of weak. I feel like i've seen this in a movie or heard it in a song before. In some lines there was some good imagery but i feel like it could have been better. Like actuaaly have them talk about why she should'nt miss him or why she should'nt love him.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very unexpected ending. But lying isn't good, why not just say it was red drank to start with?
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Review of defeat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was very descriptive, i just wish it told more of what defeat was. I really did'nt understand the line "those six letter"
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Review of Intruder Alert  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This story makes you want to keep reading because it has that little bit of suspicion in it. You used a great choice of words while doing your imagery. Overall htis story was really good.
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Review of The Long Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great imagery. It was very intresting and it kind of reminded me of little red riding hood!
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Review of Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
who's asking the question "awful weather isn't it" ? This poem had very good details it was just a little hard to comprehend.
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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
the poem was confusing. I couldnt really understand what was going on.
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Review of A tragic accident  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the story but i felt as though there should have been more background information to it. Like you said your true love but earlier on in the story you said your friend which one was he ?
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Review of Strangers Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was really good. It made it all the more better that it was something i could relate to. How did her heart brake though?
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Review of skin.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem had alot of great imagery. It was very easy to comprehend and it was very easy to relate to. The word in between it line made you do a liittle thinking and I enjoyed that. Overall it was a good poem!
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