I really understand the concept & meaning in the poem. It makes sense cause a lot of kids are extremely lucky and they don't even know it a lot of the time
If I were to put this into one word it would be:Amazing! this poem teaches people to have a positive outlook on life and to never give up on your dreams no mater how impossible they may seem to others. To put it simply I am absolutely amazed at your work and creativity just keep doing what your doing and I hope to see more :)
Nice job on how ya laid out the chapter really nice touch on coloring the text to make sure the reader doesn't get confused trying to figure out whose talking I applaud you for that my friend very nice and here's a little something for ya:)
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