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Review of Time to Fly  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
good word choice i liked reading everyword.. great peom
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Review of High School  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
i can relate to this even if im not a freshmen andymore and thats what you want to do ...relate with your audience and your word choice and format were also good..
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Review of Frozen I Am  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
i liked your word choice and format of writing it was an ok peom ;)
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Review of 4 Knocks Too Many  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
lol it was very enjoyable i just say kep up the good work..and it was funny and your format was great i really like your writhing i will lokk for more of it ;)
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Review of Hopelessness  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.5)
this peom was ok.. i liked the meaning and concept behind it but i feel like the formatting was very poor and you repeated words alot..overall it was a good peom to read
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Review of No Longer Here  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
i enjoyed reading this peom i feel like its something alot of people can easily connect too.it was also well writin and looks like they put emmotion into their words and the vocab was very strong
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Review of Marriage  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I like that it feel like this person is a mentor..maybe this was their purpose in writing this..idk but it was a good poem to read and it was well written eventhough no signs of rhyme
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Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i sooooo love this poem it is everything that im going throught. i love your word choice and imagery..i would love to read more of your writing
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Review of A Rush of Blood  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
thi poem was not my style at all but i like your word choice..thanks for lettn me read and review it though
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Review of For A Girl  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.5)
this poem is most def. for a girl if you take the time to understand it ithink you thought about this alot before you wrote it because it isnt simple to understand... god job though
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Review of Sleep In Safety  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
i really didnt understand this poem so therfore i couldnt relate to it in anyways i think it should have more insite to this
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Review of Selfless Bastard  Open in new Window.
Review by Scarlett Ohara Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
i like the imagery that you created for me as i read the poem. i didn't think it would be about what it really was about but i like your way of thinking much better . you also helped me use my senses as i read, the spaces between the lines in stanzas gave me time to think about the last .. i really enjoyed your poem and the idea behind it..i enjoyed reading it all. your best line of imagery was ( the air-smoothing curtain drapes over me,my face,my heart,my soul )..thanks for letting me read your poem
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