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Review of A Friend  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This poem seems like you just wrote exactly what your definition of a friend is... its a good poem but it does need some work. Be careful with capitalization and spelling. Your i needs to be changed to I and succeed is spelled wrong. I am always self-conscious of these things. I always double check my poems after I write them. This might help you out alot. Also, the last line of the poem kinda messes up the flow of the poem for me. I really don't understand the point of it. Maybe you can break it down for me. Respond to this review and let me know the meaning of the last line of the poem.
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