Very cool, it seems like this is an alternate life you are living! I like the writing style as well, it's kinda like mine the first person. I like the names as well which is a weak point for me, I have a problem coming up with names that are believable. I research all of them and come up with the damnedest things. But, anyway godd luck on this and I hope to read more...keep me posted please!
Thanks,
Sean
I can just say WOW! This is really good! As I read I wondered if you were going to get to the idea of the European Werewolf, and you did. I love the idea of this as a research paper, and the use of the Woodall name as a researcher. I can't remember just yet, but isn't that the name of the lady that lived with the apes in that famous documentary? The Asian werewolf part was really cool too. I thought of how Asians were -from what I had read about- during the Viet Nam war, they were sleak in their ability to hunt our soldiers. What a great imagination for all parts. I also liked that you went back to pre-history Gondwanaland to start your story. I feel that many people, like myself, that hold an interest in the legends werewolves, will really enjoy this work. Sometimes when I read something in this much detail, I often wonder if the person writing this is really a published pro testing the waters for a hit novel. Good luck with your writing!
Thanks,
Sean
Very cool! I'm a guitarist and went through much of the same that you did. This is good and I did learn something! Good luck in chello and your writing!
Thanks,
Sean
Ok, I'm hooked into knowing what this person did in his life. Even if you don't decide to finish it, at least let me know that much. I think you should finish it. I also like the wording you used in the line about "the taste of moistened earth in his mouth." Really good wording. Good luck with you writing!
Thanks,
Sean
I have a line from this that I like a lot, "like a plague, we molest what is perfect in imagination whilst we transform it to decrepit reality." That is just too true! Great job on this. As I have said before, I am not a poet, and I don't pretend that I can write poetry. This is a great example of extreme thought. It's like asking the question, " If the universe is expanding constantly, what is it expanding in to?"
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