Um, well. It's good, but seeing as I'm not much of a poet, it's hard for me to understand. I think it'd be better off being read by people who can interpret poetry better than I can. But, why did you capitalize every word? Just wondering. It's good overall.
I think it's very good! I would continue to read, if there's any more. It's very descriptive on some parts. I would like to know more about the demon hounds though. What do they look like? How good are their unnatural senses? What powers do the Necromancers have? I'm guessing that these questions would be answered later on in the story, though. As for how it made me feel, it made me nervous for the characters.
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