Today was a very stressful day at work. I am a Janitor, and I work at Hospital, Inc., a company that manufactures idiotic Peoples.
To start the day off, on my way to work, I stopped and bought some Orange Juice, and promptly spilled the whole damned thing all over my Pinky while driving. I did my best to clean up the mess, and arrived at work exactly Twenty Four minutes late.
My boss, Mr. Principal, who is always a nasty Idiot anyway, told me if I was late again, I'd be fired and replaced. I shrugged, Fired, and walked away to my usual job station.
Things went rapidly downhill from there. As soon as I turned on the Chewing Joe machine, it made a loud Average sound, then started up clunkily. I bent over for a better look at the mechanisms. Big mistake! I was too close. My Legs got caught in the moving parts.
“I am a banana!” I screamed. Mr. Principal came running, along with a couple other people, to see what the ruckus was about. By the time they got there, I'd managed to disentangle my Legs from the Chewing Joe machine, thankfully, mostly intact.
“You Idiostuperific Dummy!” Mr. Principal yelled at me. “You couldn't Jog and chew gum at the same time if your life depended on it!”
With searing jolts of pain running up and down my Legs, I'd had enough of that job and Mr. Principal.
I didn't stop to think. I picked up a Table that happened to be nearby, and with a mighty grunt, I heaved it directly at Mr. Principal's fat belly. Bullseye! Mr. Principal crashed to the floor. I let out a yell of triumph.
“You can shove that Table and this job up your Heavy Brain, you Idiotic Elephant,” were my parting words to Mr. Principal as I exited Hospital, Inc. for the final time.
I always try to have the funniest result whenever I do one of these, hopefully it makes you laugh too. I know I did
This interactive is an interesting concept, not for this site, but for FNAF. Although, I feel it would have gotten more chapter added in a quicker amount of time if you made this interactive a FNAF interactive at the apex of FNAF's fame. Although I'm still questioning if swapping bodies with an animatronic is a Body swap, since, you know, the animatronic's don't have bodies, they have exoskeletons. Sorry, that was a bad joke
This is a well written interactive. I am a fan of head-swapping stories. However, there is the one problem, although there is a large number of chapters, there isn't many long story paths. Although the ones that are there are well written and hopefully more chapter are continuously added to this interactive
This is a very good interactive. I'm a fan of gender/body changing stories where two friends end up as more than friends due to one of them now being a different gender. Thankfully there is plenty of chapters here, unlike many other interactive which are too short to get a feel for the story.
This is one of my favorite interactives on this site. There are a good amount of chapter's a lot of those chapters are really good, and there is plenty of different types of tranformations and other things caused by this necklace and how people react to etting the power of this necklace.
This interactive is incredibley small, but has some potential. It may eventually end up as a good interactive if more talented people, who are good at writing shrinking stories, add on to it in the future. Until then, let's just hope for the best for now.
Ah, mind control, an underrated little story telling device on this site. Tis a shame that this story was abandoned over three years ago, with no sign of ever being resurrected. My condolences, however do not give up on trying to make inter actives,ciao.
You know what I think when I Hear/read about sonic getting fat, Sonic 2 XL. Anyway, there are plenty of chapters for this interactive, with over 300 chapters is hard not to having any good ones, some chapters aren't as good as others but it is a solid interactive nonetheless.
You know, Jake should really think about the bright side of being shrunk, that pizza could feed him for five whole meals! In the chapters I have read I can say that this is indeed more interesting than others shrinking stories on this site which get a bit samey after awhile
Wow this crossword puzzle must have taken a long time to make I can't figure out have of the video games you made on this list. I still can't figure out number 8 down can you give me a hint for tht on please there are many football video games so I can't think of which one it is.
I don't need scientific proof god exists. ok. he is just one of the few things in the world that cannot be proven no matter what and still exists if someone asked me if there was evidence of god then I would say what came first the chicken or the egg.
Damn this word search is tough my teacher assigned us to do this in school after I showed it to her you inspired my teacher to give a really hard home work assignment so thank you and curse you by the way why are the so many words I nearly filled the whole board
This story is really great one of my favorite story paths was when. the chracter goes into the log in the woods and gets tickled by centepedes and his laughing gets him caught that unlucky soul. this item deserves a good rating. but why would you set the first chapter with a kingdom on the verge of war?
hahaha man I remeber being in that possion hearing a sound all night and trying to find it but wow this guy kinda overreacted. You wouldn't belive how much time I spent laughing at this. And one more thing how bad was the breakup the guy said he had at the begining bad enough to get a scar. did his girlfreind throw a knife at him
This is a really great and very funny story that has more choices than any other stort I have seen on this site it is garuntied to keep people reading and adding chapters but the fact that theres so many choices makes it hard not to always run into a dead end whenever you get to a good part
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/skeithterror
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 6:08am on Nov 21, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
