Hi - I enjoyed the poem. The imagery was good - it made me see, smile and remember... I especially liked the message of the last stanza, but we need to make it more powerful somehow. The second line of that last stanza seems skewed somewhat - maybe invert the syntax and try using different words for the end rhyme (?). Also, the idea of "whatever religion" (which is what I like in the last stanza's message) contrasts sharply with the rest of the poem (which really is Christmas), especially the two lines preceding it (the last two of the previous stanza). I'm not sure, of course, but it might improve the poem to include some reference to other religions in other parts of the poem - I think the contrast and juxtaposition of the last two stanzas is great, but isolated. Incoporating similar juxtapositions elsewhere in the poem might make the last stanza more powerful - well, it's something to think about anyway!
Happy New Year - and write, write, write!
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