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Review of Wheel of Fortune  Open in new Window.
for entry "June 12, 2021" Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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nicely written poem about Father's Day. Sorry to hear about your dad and his memory loss at this time. Always keep those memories of your Father's close to your heart.

This is a great Father's Day poem you have written. I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems. my favorite part of your poem is...

I hand him a rough, weathered totem
and ask, "Can you show me how the water moves?'.
Slowly, cautiously he moves the talisman:
Up, down, circles, spirals,
a figure eight for eternity
For this Sunday
driftwood and whale song
is the medicine we need.


Keep Writing!!!

Blessings, Sharmelle

A dragon reading a book by candle light


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Review of Camping Trip  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Theme/Subject Matter: "Camping Trip" is a wonderful poem!!!

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the first stanza.

My Favorite Part: The third and fourth stanzas are my favorite.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of telling a great story about how you have never been camping before and your expectations.

Keep Writing!!!

Blessings, Sharmelle

A dragon reading a book by candle light


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Review of Isle of Palms  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Theme/Subject Matter: "Isle of Palms" is a beautiful poem!!!

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the first Cherie and the first Gary.

My Favorite Part: The second Cherie and second Gary are my favorite.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of telling a great story.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

A dragon reading a book by candle light


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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Theme/Subject Matter: "Waltzing With Daddy" is a wonderful poem!!!

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the second stanza.

My Favorite Part: The fourth stanza is my favorite.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of telling a great story about your dad when you were younger.

Keep Writing!!!

Blessings, Sharmelle

A dragon reading a book by candle light


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Review of Lonely Times  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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please do not take this personally and I do not want to discourage you in any way but, with this poem, you should add something about St. Patrick's Day to it since that's what it supposed to be about. I love your poem it's just missing that ok.

Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I love the way your poem rhymes here and the way you tell your story about Black History Month! I found no distractions in this poem. This is a very lovely poem and thanks for sharing and entering the "Poetry Topic of the Month Contest" Open in new Window.!

Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I loved your poem but, one thing that threw me off a little was in your fourth stanza where you say "Libraries for book lovers is Santa’s wished for sleigh." maybe you could have said, "Libraries for book lovers is Santa’s wish per se." or something in that area. I know you are trying to rhyme this poem and that's my only suggestion for this poem.

I am so sorry, about this review it's been a while since I have given a review and I am not very good at them. I do hope this helps you though.

Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: This is a wonderful poem about your friend Jane!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the first and last stanzas. These stanzas reveal that your friend Jane is there.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because of the way your friend is there for you.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story about your friend in your poem.


Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Dear Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your friendly Dear Friend Letter, Lilli!!!

You are very kind, gracious, and wonderful!!!

This letter is very meaningful to me and I enjoyed every minute of it!!!

Everything you have written in this letter can be so true for so many different people at different times!!!

Thanks again for writing a very beautiful letter to all your friends here at WdC!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of My Faith  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful to you!


Theme/Subject Matter: "My Faith" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the second stanza.

My Favorite Part: Lines seven, eight, nine, and ten are my favorites because you found God thankfully.

My Suggestions: I no suggestions at this time.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!




Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"The Value of Values" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!! Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

This poem really reflects in our world today that most of our children do not have as much respect as we did as a child. I find myself very disappointed with this matter.

I really like the last stanza in your poem because you make a great point about respect in it.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. You make some great points with this poem too. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of Autumn Magic  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"Autumn Magic" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!! Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

You also tell a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of The Anchor  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I am sorry I am not really familiar with non-rhyming poetry, but I will try my best with this review ok. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"The Anchor" is a wonderful poem and I like it.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of The Magic Needle  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is very unique, I like the rhythm of it and you did a great job with this poem. I just really enjoyed your poem.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

I really like the eighth stanza where the blanket was sewn up and it was able to protect the child lol.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of THIRST  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I am sorry I am not really familiar with non-rhyming poetry, but I will try my best with this review ok. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I like your "THIRST" poem even though it does not rhyme like I am used too. I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems. I like your last stanza because it tell us what words are in this stanza.

Keep Writing!!!

PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to accomplish. Sorry, I am late on doing this I just lost one of my dogs this week.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"A Milky Way Wonder" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!! Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

I really enjoyed this poem of yours... I use to go out and lay on a blanket in the grass and watch the stars at night and even on a cloudy night, I would see what the clouds would show me lol. But I can no longer lay in the grass to watch the stars and the clouds because of my disability and not being able to get up off the floor/ground by myself anymore lol. Even though I cannot do it that way anymore I can always do these things while sitting in a chair outside lol. It may not be as fun but it's doable.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to accomplish. Sorry, I am late on doing this I just lost one of my dogs this week.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of In His Presence  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"In His Presence" is a fantastic poem that has great rhythm! Your rhythm in this poem emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

I really enjoyed the fifth and sixth stanzas! they are my favorite because in the fifth stanza you say...
"I don’t recall what he said, I remember his tone,
Hearing it, I know we’re not on our own."

and in the sixth stanza you say...
"For the first time, I saw God today.
In amazement, I found myself kneeling to pray."

Yes God is with us where ever we go and all you need to do is to believe that God is with you every day!

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to do.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of All Hallows Eve  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "All Hallows Eve" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fourth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because the Goblin was sure no one knew his secret and that was exactly the way he liked it, feeling confident his little trick would work.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of Ethereal Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I Love the rhythm you have here! It is different from what I am used to but it works for me lol.

Again I love the seventh stanza because "Minute by minute, details begin to fade away but he will hold her image with him throughout the day."

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of The Heroic Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "The Heroic Heart" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the seventh stanza.

My Favorite Part: The seventh stanza is my favorite because with a gentle touch and true love's kiss he once more made her whole.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of INDEPENDENCE DAY  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

You Independence Day poem is wonderful, and I love the rhythm you have added to this poem. I like your second stanza.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Cruel Fate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Great job on your poem. I like the rhythm of your poem too.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "A Fed-Up Plate Dishes Dirt" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the third stanza.

My Favorite Part: The first stanza is my favorite because "Dinner's on me," screamed the plate. and "This is dirty work I hate!".

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Lost Without You  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Lost Without You" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the stanzas one and five.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because He sought to speak with god.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of The Way It Was/Is  Open in new Window.
Review by Shar's Holl... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "The Way It Was / Is -" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the second stanza.

My Favorite Part: The second stanza is my favorite because it did not matter about the people hiding there nor the people's jealous glares.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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