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Once upon a time there was a wolf name Windy, but Windy was an odd little wolf. Everyday, Windy would go to a tree and sit at the base of it. One day, another wolf came to see what she was doing. "What are you doing?"
"Sitting." Her voice was soft and hid her emotions well. Because of that, the other wolf never found out about her fears. Until finally, there was a scream. Windy shot up and ran for her pack. There was five humans, with pointed sticks attacking her friends, her family. Her brother was shoved to the ground, the stick held against his neck. Windy let out a fierce growl and shot to the human that held her brother down. She jumped and set her canines against his neck. The man fell back, startled.
"Windy, Leave him, we got to help Mom and Sammy." That set her world in sharp focus. She jumped off the man and left him alive. She decided the world needed a little more mercy. She jumped over a wolf that was hunched over, and stopped short. There was more humans. Hidden.
She looked around, her eyes were illuminated a bright jay blue. She spotted her pack and locked on to them, transferring them to a distance where they were safe. After her last pack member was away and safe, she disappeared in a wisp.
Windy stumbled when she landed, a sharp pain in her rib cage. She yelped and slammed her eyes shut, trying to halter the pain. Her youngest brother rushed to her side. His fur was a smooth gray and his eyes a soft, kind green. "W-wind-dy?" he was afraid. She would do anything to try to make him forget the horrors of what just happened, but she wasted to much energy, and the pain in her rib limited her movement.
A weight landed on her, making her breathing ragged and hurt with every breath. She felt the force of her life draining, but the pain ceased. She just felt tired.
She heard a faint cry or pain and sorrow, and then she drifted off into an eternal sleep.
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