You used really good vocabulary and punctuation. There was also really good sentence structure. Although, I didn't quite understand what this poem was about. Will you please explain that to me? Also, I like the last verse alot. It made me giggle a bit.
You used lots of emotion. You also put a lot of thought into this because you can tell. I love your word choice and sentence structure. The only one mistake I saw was you didn't capitilize every line, like beauty and questions. You did connect with the reader. Your are a good poet. Write on!
This is an okay poem. The reason I gave it a rating of 2.5 is:
1) I didn't get the point.
2) I liked how it was repetitive, but it still didn't explain anything.
3) You did use good sentence choice, but I didn't feel emotion.
4) Also, I didn't feel any connection.
You always want to make a connection with the reader. Keep practicing...you will get there!!
Wow to come up with this quote on your own is great, very inteligent. Now what I wish for is to share this with my classmates for us to review and go over. We like talking about what we think it means. I like the words you used; ponder,cogitate,bitter,and irate,consolation. I like the fact that you speak about wondering, because I know for a fact that I always wonder about things. There is always a question of why or how. If you wish please rate and review my work.
I like how you shared this personal experience with the public. Creating an image as usual. A woman with horns seems quite strange. I like how you told us about the way the woman looked. You run the whole dream which is strange. The title caught my attention very much. You are a great writer and always catch my attention.
Wow this is very out there. Did you make up your own words? Way to create a picture in my head. I loved how you made it stick out in the static item by the title that also caught my attention. Although I didnt really understand it because of huge vocabulary; I really enjoyed it.
Wow, that was absolutely amazing. When you write chapter two please let me know because I would love to read it. You definitely caught my attention in several different ways. The big vocabulary shows a lot. You also used the five senses which gave me a picture of what all is going on.
This was a really great poem. I really like the way you used your 5 senses, which really caught my attention. I also like the fact that I was able to put a picture in my head of what is going on. I feel that you did very great on this poem. Thanks for letting me experience this kind of feeling of glory.
Write On!
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