This was amazing. A pleasure to read. It was written beautifully minus a few small details. Every once in a while you left out a few words. I do that all the time. When I do it it's because my mind in moving a million miles a minute and my hands just can't keep up. It's probably dumb for me to even try to give feedback as if you even glance at my portfolio you will realize that i'm pathetic. I have only posted one thing as of yet and it isn't even a real story;it's just a little blurb that sums up my life. I can't really write but i'm great at coming up with stories. I just can't put my stories into words. I personally am an actor. I love romeo and juliet and I love that while in most stories Romeo and Juliet would be the main event, in your story it is but a minor detail in the grand scheme of things. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story.(wow 892 characters)
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