Again, you touch a special place for me. I have many special momentoes including little stones and pine cones. Little papers colored by my Grands and many trinkets. I love them all and always make room for more. You have a wonderful gift and my thanks for sharing them.
So intense and sad. I feel so much emotion pouring forth. This is well versed and you see so much. It is like you climb inside her mind and words flow. My warmest blessings to you both and I am so glad she has you as a friend. I'm sure by these words, she feels the same. A touching tribute. Bravo
This is tragic but with a positive end. I hope to see more on that. You tell it like it is and you did it well. Whomever this is about, I hope they have found a bit of joy to live for and more joy every day they get thru. So that every day will be a blessing with much to look forward to. Warmest Blessings.
I came into work this morning at 4:33 am and I would love to have the "Mccrew" working with me. Imagination and a good sense of humor help make the day go faster. This is adorable. I thank you for sharing it and it is a job well done. I look forward to more lyrics. Bravo.
This was a cute read and I enjoyed it with a few chuckles. You have his language down to a "T". I can picture him just like the cartoons. Excellent descriptives and narration. Found a couple run on sentences but that is all. Charming and witty, write on. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This makes an excellent point that all should read on a daily basis. You have great ideas and thoughts. So many times our loved ones pass on and we are left thinking, I should have, I could have or I would have. My family just calls it; shoulda, woulda, coulda. This is good but the way you have it set up makes for a difficult read. This is just a suggestion but you may want to try putting each on separate line, then space between every four or so. Good thoughts so write on. Bravo My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This is awesome. I love Sci-Fi and the Lord of the Rings triolgy. Once you correct the grammar and spelling problems, I give it a perfect five. Great story and descriptions. When I see thru the eyes of the writer, they certainly have a story well done. Super job. Kudos
Perfect. Just like my little Grands! Easy read with good rythmn. Excellent. Every now and then I let the little ones run free in the grocery store. They love it. Another favorite for me.
This poem will hit home to many. Very well written and phrased. Nice flow. The expressions pull the reader in. It is intense and sad. Yes, some will be offended by it. As prose goes it is very good. Kudos
This is good. Nice steady flow. Takes me back to my first love. Every little detail seems imprinted in the brain for always. Something one does not forget and you put it in a beautiful poem. Write on.
I will be anxiously waiting for the book to be out. This kept me reading and wanting more. Well written, good descriptives and story line. I enjoyed the scenery and vivid images. One question though, is it two story or two storey?
Bravo! Warmest Blessings from Sassy
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