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Review of Poetry Terms  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Excellent quiz you created here. I will take it again, In doing so will educate me more about poetry.

WRITE ON
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Review of Poetry Forms  Open in new Window.
for entry " Haiku, Brazilian" Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Unratable.)
I truly like this form of the Haiku. Even though I never heard of it, I want to thank you for taking the time in researching it and posting it on Writing.Com.

Really enjoy the rhyming pattern. Gonna practice it and write some of my own.
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Review of The Temple  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great article on your spiritual journey. I'm on a spiritual journey as well, but sounds like yours was so profound and unforgetful.

You have extra spaces on your article: such as the 4th paragraph from the bottom in the word (fruit,). You have others but I lost track.

You need a 2 spaces after the period (end of sentences).

When I had finished , the long flame was taken away and the priests lit the rest of the thousand lamps.I was given a ceremonial shoulder garment and some "fruit ," thanked for my efforts and allowed to go back to the place I was originally sitting.

Anyway I enjoyed your article and it uplifted my spirits. Thank you, I am Grateful for you knowledge.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My first try on a word search here at WDC. It was fun looking for words. Thanks!
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Review of Courage  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I couldn't agree more! You can't have one without the other, so to say. It's duality, can't have "day light" all day without the "night".

I'll leave you with this quote (if you don't alreay have it.)
Anatole France:

To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.

Thank you for sharing
MCamacho
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Review of Beliefs  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great article on beliefs and visualizations!

I don't usually rate and review articles or stories but this piece caught my eye. The message is well said and pretty much well written.

PS: I have been reading and researching information on this topic and have found very interesting.

Write on!
MCamacho
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,
This is how I rate and review. I will let you know the positives and negatives, such as:

Positive: You have great a rhyming scheme [(a,a) see, he]in this piece with a well written and flowing message.

Negative: Is this a poem or a prose? It looks like a prose to me. If not a prose; you can break up your lines into poetic paragraphs called stanzas (just in case you didn't know that) which will be easier to read and will clarify your pauses/line breaks. Punctuation: Needs two spaces in between periods if you are going to keep it as a prose.

Positive: You also have no spelling errors. :)

Write on!
~M.Camacho
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Review of CHANGE  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You have great rhyming scheme in your poem. =)(aa, rage, change) bb,show, go). But few spelling errors and capitalization (your i's).

You don't have stanzas. An example of a few stanzas:
This is a couplet stanza with 2 lines (with no line space after the first line, only after the first stanza):

Been indepentdant, held my own. (Stanza #1)
Made better decisions, when i was grown.

So now i know and it's to late.(Stanza #2)
To change my past and control my fate.

But it's not to late to change your future! :)
Write On!
Mari
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Review of Spirituality  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good article on spirituality.

I can resonate with this piece as I too believe that spirituality is beyond religion. It is the Whole picture as opposed to just one or two views of some.

My personal experience is that my life is flowing easier than before I became spiritually alive.

Write On!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this is a well-written piece.

As I read this story, it evoke feeling "ugh" when he found out what the coffee was made of; my stomache almost felt upset.

Imagery was vivid in my mind of the two interacting,
And I was stunned of its ending, I didn't think he was going to continue drinking, ugh.
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Review of A Poetic Prayer  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Chelle,

You don't have punctuation in some of your lines.

Also, your capitalization is not consistent as well.

Your stanzas are well written, however, with a positive message.

Great prayer poem! I love it!

Write on!!

MC
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Review of SPOOK'S DELIGHT  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sherri,

Well written poem about Halloween. I don't see any spelling or punctuation errors. I noticed the aabb form you used here.

Write On!!

MC
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Now that was a touching poem! What a tribute to your mom. I can resonate somewhat, that's probably why I felt something within me. Thank you!
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Review of FIRE  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
In you last line you have "comsumes" did you mean "consumes"?

I don't know about the style you used "Haiku" so I can't comment on that.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
What a tribute to a loved one. I enjoyed this piece, The devotion you have for the person in the poem was expressed very well.

It flows well and I don't see any spelling errors.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem made me giggle; a surprising ending I didn't expect.

This poem flowed so well.

How long have you been writing poems?

Thank you.
Mari
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Mrs. H

What a picturesque story, it evoked images of the field with mountain tops and it flowed so well.

Write On! Gotta get back to my coffee and chores.

I enjoy reading your poetry; so I will read more later.

Poetically yours,
~M
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Review of I'm Special Too  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Mrs. H.

This poem is so true, flows so well and evokes my memories when I used think "where are my talents".

Thank you for your gift in letting others know that we have a gift!

~Mari
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Review of THANK YOU, GOD  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sherri,

I enjoyed your grateful poem. What a way to give thanks to our God for every blessing in our lives in the style of poetry. I am grateful as well for folks like you! I can learn from you and this site. Thank you.

~M
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very inspiring, message. I enjoy reading these types of poem, there are times it inspires me to write. Thank you.

I don't see spelling or punctuation errors. Write On!

~M
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Review of Finally Sane  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good rhyming you have in your stanzas, however, my other observation is you probably can separate the second paragraph and make 2 more stanzas. Just a suggestion.

Another observation; you might want to add some punctuation.

I like the poem!
Write On!
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Review of Go Home  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem. Thank you for the message.
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