I like this very much(even if you would becompetition in this contest if I enter it). It speaks so poignantly to the feelings a mother has of her son fighting so far away...Keep up the great work.
Kevin
Wow, what a creative story! I thought you developed the characters well and the story line kept my interest. there were a couple of time when I thought some of the comma usage was gramatically incorrect like, "I was so good it was scary, how natural it came." but I could be wrong. Over-all it was a well written story. Keep up the good work!
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