This poem gave me a good laugh. Rather ill-mannered, vulgar, and socially unacceptable, but my sense of humor delves in on that. It paints Santa in a rather negative light, which is appropriate after giving a long thought about "Santa Claus is Comin' to Town" and its lyrics. Well done!
I really do like this poem, despite the fact that it's pretty depressing. But that's not important; a lot of things I see or read are pretty depressing. This poem is well-written, expresses the emotions of the characters rather well, and is... well, it's a good poem. Sure, it's a bit bland for a review, but I don't go for flamboyance. ;) Keep up the good work!
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