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Review of Our Lives  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
yea u cant have gd without bad, otherwise u dont appreciate tha good, goood poem keep writing.
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Review of Call of the Wild  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful words.
This was a very good poem to go witha very good story.
Some of it i didn't understand but i'm tired and don't feel like thinking.
am i right in believing you put a lot of effort in this, 'cause it shines through with melodic resonance.
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Review of The Sad, Sad Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very powerful, Simple but powerful, good use of words to create Raw emotion, i also like the double spacing.
Is this a true story or one you made up?
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Review of Free  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is also a good poem, although
' fell through the door,
But you locked the vault.'
These too lines don't really make sence to me, it seems that you chose the word vault specefically so it rhymes. Vault may make sence, but it gave the immpression that you could'nt find the right words.
Other than that each verse was fantastic, it captured the emotion, and i got the picture.
Well done mate.
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Review of To Touch The Sun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem, i will take every word to heart.... Each line rung true.......
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Review of Song of Healing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good idea, needs some work though. I like the names you picked for your characters. Keep writing this was a very good piece, but i couldn't help to feel i was missing out on the bigger picture, is this fom a larger story or somethin? Although this was excellantly descripted it still needs some work on grammer which i hate probably as much as you do, but it has to be done!! Other than that keep writing and have fun!!
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Review by Prince Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'd liike to hear this in a song... What instrument do you play or do you just sing?
Where did you get the inspiration for this song?
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Review of My Fairytale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I like this poem, so i read it twice. I don't know if this was at all intended by you but it told me you have to look beyond the pretence of beauty and perfectionism, into what is real and true. The world isn't perfect and it will never be. The words that were used painted a beautiful picture, 'Fairies flit between the soft clouds'
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Review of Apocrypha  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is easilly better than the other two. Just because the other dude put his poem in the shape of a Whale Tale. This poem was Fantastic.
This poem made me think a bit more about the sea and the qoute, two thumbs up.

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