What a wonderful story! If it isn't true now (still?), I suspect it one day will be. I sense your real concern for the Professor, and your own trepidation, through the concern and trepidation of your "self" in the story. I especially like your use of pacing and punctuation to convey your character's tumultuous emotions at this meeting.
Very nice work. Thanks!
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