This poem is as good as the other I read about letting soldiers lie. It is just as great. You have such a great structure and sequence. You are an exceptional writer and you should keep going. Everything you write is somethiing extra to my day and something I can add to my knowledge. I won't ever forget what you write because it is to my mind as pen is to paper!
I really liked the way you did the entire poem without using a single word twice. It was great and quite enjoyable to read. Wonderful piece, hoping more are like that one. Well done and write on!
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