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Review of The Theophany  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it's as if someone in the modern age wrote psalms or proverbs. I feel like it runs well with the given tropes of old testament writings. I was initially put off by the old english. "O ye" like here goes another elegant sophist. all in all it's pretty cool it would work well inside of a larger work that has a apostle or prophet of some kind. The verse about harlots lacked any relevant references to the life,thoughts, or moral depravity that one might experience in a life of prostitution.


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