I am spellbound on reading the essay. An amazing philosophical discourse has been presented by the author. It has an essence of the Hindu philosophy taken from the Vedas. Time is the guiding force. From days auld langsyne it's the time that has been seeing everyone and everything in this universe. We are bound in the eternal chain of time from which we have neither respite nor escape.
This is a prevailing argument- an argument on the existence of God. This is a cold war between science and philosophy which I suppose will never come to an end. Without science existence is invalid. But science can never prove empirically whether God exists or not because where science ends philosophy begins. The author has put forward some genuine ideas to ponder over.
This is a hearty tribute to those brave sons and daughters who fight in the war front. The precious lives are slaughtered mercilessly in the ghastly warfare. Nothing is gained ultimately. What remains is the wanton waste of human lives. Every new morning with the aural beauty of the sun proclaims a new beginning- an ushering of warfree peaceful nation.
Dear friend, I am greatly moved by the ideas you have shared with the readers. What an impressive imagination. Only a great fictional writer can think in this line. The characters created by the author have come alive, become vibrant with the exuberance of emotions. The story ends with a happy note that the creator of the fictional characters at the fag end finds her characters come alive to life only for a few minutes and complete the story bringing a smile in her face.
God is always dear to us. But unfortunately we fail to recognize the presence of God within us. He always takes a gentle care of us. The door is opened by Him and a soft gentle touch of love makes us feel that love is there in the universe for everyone. What we need to do is to keep our eyes and mind open so that wr can hear the unheard surrealistic call of God.
The writer's imagination reaches its zenith when he delineates an unusual theme in the texture of the piece he is writing. The poet has used a plethora of images. The use of similes and metaphors has heightened the theme. Mind is crux. It is our best friend yet our worst enemy.
Imaginative faculty is the only prerogative of the poets. As soon as he pens down his unique ideas into the apparently simple texture of the poem he unlocks the gate and involves the readers into analyzing the poems. This unusual poem provokes me to read the poem. I am amazed at the way the poet describes how often loners can derive facilities from the society. I have never thought like this before. It is also quite interesting that this can be the subject of a poem.
The poem ' Love in God's Being' projecting the theme of intense love for his pretty lady love whose hug, embrace and kiss give the poet solace, joy and passionate feelings of the poet are roused. He feels ecstatic in the cozy embrace of his beloved. The poem juxtaposes the carpe diem theme with the spirituality which is quite unusual yet interesting. The last few lines remind me of Browning's theme of love.
I always love reading and reviewing poems. I am amazed at the way the poet squeezes his heartfelt emotions. The birds are obviously God's one of the most wonderful creations. They are the symbols of freedom. The joys a bird gets while flying in the azure is unparalleled. But that joy is lost as nature is ravaged of the panoramic beauty. The trees have been cut off. Though the bird sings, the melodious note reveals the unspoken agony.
One's emotional outburst knows no bound at all when one's own leaves the joys and sorrows of life far behind leaving his or her near and dear ones in utter agony. It's very true that 'there is a great difference between imagining the agony and feeling the misery.' The prose can makeanyone moved to tears if one has felt the same plight of losing someone dear for ever.
Being in imprisonment is no less than a curse. Imprisonment kills one both inwardly and outwardly. Freedom is the clarion call of souls. Man is born free although everywhere he is in chains. A prisoner feels dejected and lost in living his life behind the bars. To become free from the monotony he finds every possibility to get rid of the flaws that compel him to be outcast from the society.
To write a review of the poem, I first of all, would like to say that poetry reveals the inner spontaneous flow of imagination but it very often depicts the truth, gives us inspiration. It is true that being socially bond people we have to abide by the established orders and rules of the society. We run amuck success. But success does not mean only money and recognition. Success is what we cultivate inwardly- the respect, self esteem and responsibilities towards family and in broader sense of the term towards the society.
Poem always reveals the inner spontaneous flow of thoughts that often bring out the truth of life. Sorrows and happiness go hand in hand. Grief never stands alone. It tries to make people feel depressed, dejected and lost. The poem is a depiction of the situation that we often face in our lives. The poet also admonishes us to reject the false call for assistance no matter even if the path is to be walked alone.
Dear friend, your free verse poem delineates the unavoidable truth that people face in their lives. When crisis strikes we become fumbled try to find a way of escape from this stark reality. But it is inevitable. What can not be cured must be endured. This is a great challenge. Acceptance of the situation makes people able to cope with the situation.
This is an impressive free verse poem designed to give the impression that when one door closes another opens. In time of crisis determination falters but mind still possesses the ambition to rise from the debris of lost hope and hit the bull's eye. It's patience that propel us to move forward once again.
This is an impressive free verse poem designed to give the impression how morality is degraded day by day. People by hook or by crook fulfills ambition or sometimes ambition is twarted. The poet by way of using selective words expresses the deepest truth that there is no place for the defeated. Society awards only the winners no matter which way the person has taken to achieve success.
The poet through his free verse poem has penned down the theme of patience and waiting. Waiting makes us feel the boredom and monotony of life but at the end it definitely yields a fruitful result for which human beings long. The poem reminds me of the famous poem 'If' of Rudyard Kipling where he inspires the readers to nurture the habit of patience. Only calm and disciplined mind confronts the turbulence and manages the situation coolly.
First of all, a heartfelt thanks goes to you for giving us the detailed information about the history of lighthouse that had been previously unknown. The job of the lighthouse keepers is hectic and monotonous yet challenging. It's for them the voyagers remain safe during the tormenting storms. We also come to know about the tallest and the most ancient lighthouse in 250BC that was ravaged by an earthquake which was enlisted as one of the seven wonders of the world.
Dear friend, poems have always been a special attraction for me, especially in case of love poems. Your poem has beautifully reflected the theme of eternal love that defies the ravaging effects of time. The poet has found all the elegant emotions in his lady love. The poem is vibrant resonance of Shakespeare's love sonnets where love is made perennial through the power of verse.
The free verse poem brings in light the theme of triumph and disaster, the impostors. The first one makes us boastful whereas the second one ruins us inwardly. We lose ourselves in the labyrinthine maze of delirium and depression. In that condition it's the determination that propel us not to stoop to the disaster rather move ahead with robust optimism.
It is true. God is the Almighty, the creator of the universe, the director of the life's drama and melodrama. He judges our actions but we can never be the judge of His deeds. The story squeezes the feelings of a bereaved heart that loses her son in an untimely demise. Her aggrieved soul finds peace when death comes closer to her. The peace lies in the union with the Almighty. Enlightenment comes only in surrealistic communion with God.
Pathos, cruelty, struggle against the wrath of time and life are amalgamated amazingly which at once rouses our pity and fear. Pity for the mishap and fear mixed with a strange feeling. How painful it is to think of the extraction of eyes for the replacement of eyes who was once able to see the world's beauty, had fun with the friends. But now darkness wraps his world from which he seeks emancipation..
The reading of the poem makes me feel sad. The poem is vibrant with the exuberance of emotions that bring "leaden eyed despair". A promise was made by a person long ago and now time has come to keep the words. The poet has used a unique narrative technic in the poem that mesmerize the readers. At last waiting ends and the reunion between the son and the father takes place. End of woes and tears.
A unique way to depict the sad tale of a street cat. The poem becomes a beautiful autobiography of a pariah cat who sitting on the porch of a deserted house watch the passersby and the couple who always brought with them a nice looking dog. The cat felt dejected as he could not remember his name and his past. All he could wish was a good accommodation and a company as the dog is now getting. The poem becomes a beautiful narrative.
The narrative is so powerful that it makes me feel the essence of love deeply. My heart goes pit a pat with every word that delineates the profound passion of the couple. My eyes never for a moment slipped from the story till the end I find the much loved and coveted reunion between the lovers. The description of nature is so vivid that it is aptly in tune with the theme of the story. My eyes become wet with the tears. The narrative technic is so attractive that never for a moment mind becomes boggled with weariness. Keep feeding your literary talent. Waiting for the new one from your end to relish the nectar of writing.
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