Good plot, nice grammar and spelling, and everyone's in character as much as possible. All in all, a very well-written pair of chapters! Though the writer of this chapter needs to remember to capitalize proper nouns, like names.
"Cameron (which peole called him Camie) is a 12 year old girl who weighs just 123lbs & he's 51ft with her brown hair. Camie had a hard life as you know that he's only family member who is actually thin indeed. Every time he eats but it didn't grew him very well."
Since when does the pronoun"he" refer to a girl? Shouldn't the first sentence read: "Cameron (people called him Camie) is a 12 year old boy who weighs just 123lbs & is 51ft with brown hair."
You also might wanna watch your spelling.
But other than that, you did rather well!
Yours truly,
-T he Sky High Pokemon
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