I love poetry and I do think this one is very good. great job. I liked it a lot. You show your heart in this. Poetry has to come from the heart just like any good song it weaves you through each line . Thank -you for sharing May Angels Watch. I hope to read more of your work sometime
It certainly got my attention! I loved the suspense . The sheer terror of what was happening in front of Alex had me wanting to know why was he being attacked? The two that came to his rescue are a curious pair. All in all I think it's a great story.
I love fiction and this captured my attention. There are many things to think on here! I like that about this piece. Is the girl friend or foe? That is the question that is on my mind. Will he regret saving her and losing the gold he coveted . So many questions to keep you going. Great job.
At first I thought I think I 'll read this later ,but then I kept reading and it started a keen interest. I liked it . I liked the hook. It kept me reading to the end. Great job.
I reall y like this. It is a reminder to us that We know not the hour of Jesus' return but we know it will be happening . It reminds us to be ready. I like how he refers to the five who were foolish not being recognized by the bridegroom.
I liked the story , but being a christian I had problems with the language.Bernie's character had dignity and understanding. It could easily be a real situation. I am glad Bernie was a mentor to this person. The characters were real to me. The situation was also real to me. Growing up in Arkansas I saw alot of racist people in my life . Why is it that every time we think we are past all that ,it jumps up and bites us again. Hatred for race creed or color is such a waste of energy. This story is memorable to me. I would read more by this author
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