Hey! Nice story here bro, I'm liking the looks of it so far! Once we get more people to add to it and get it going further I think it'll go pretty well! Hardest part is always to get people to actually write something... Anyways, keep up the good work, and I hope to see more later!
Hey hey hey, great job on this! It takes a lot of guts to make a story like this that most people would shy away from, but you handled it with aplomb! It isn't huge right now, but it'll get bigger over time. Best of luck to you, and keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, man, I love magic: the gathering so much. It's the bomb for me to see that someone is working on an interactive for it, because it's so hard these days to find any actually good stories about MTG! I just wanted to say thank you, and keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, nice job on this interactive! I really liked how you weren't afraid to straight up say what was unacceptable in this story instead of catering to the readers. People don't like following rules these days, which explains the lack of chapters. Good luck, though, and keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, great job! Right off the bat, this caught my attention! I liked how you portrayed the master here! I saw this as a symbolism to growing up and shedding our childhood. I don't know if that was the intent, but thank you anyways for sharing this thought with us, and keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, I'm really sorry to hear about your grandfather, first off... Secondly, I would just like to commend you on the way you put your feelings into words. The way you describe your grandfather is a lot like how I thought of mine before he passed away 7 years ago yesterday. Thank you for sharing this with us, and best of wishes during these hard times.
hey hey hey wonderful job on this! I think this really describes what the world felt like when we sent astronauts into the final frontier. People were nervous, people were excited, people finally had a champion to get behind. This story does a really good job of embodying all of the different feelings people had. This honestly really just resonated with me a lot! Thank you for sharing this with us, and keep up the good work!
hey hey hey, great job on the story! I really liked how you were totally unafraid to share your opinion, no matter what other people will say about it. In the world we live in today, people seem to love to bash on God... I appreciate it when people stand up and share their opinion. Again, good job on the story, sometime I want to hear about how your grandmother got out of that grave, and keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, great job on the story! I have to say, out of all the (seemingly) hundreds of pokemon stories on this site, this one would still have to be my favorite! I like it when people have an idea, and then they put that idea into action. Thank you for taking the time to create this story, and thanks for sharing it with us!
Man, that sounds like you had a pretty awesome experience, man. To be honest with you i kind of envy you. you really have a way with words, man. Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work!
Nice job, man! I'm really impressed by how you managed to put all of those ideas together so coherently! It seems like you get a lot of great ideas, and i would just encourage you to keep on sharing.By the way, have fun with the Jeep! keep up the good work!
Hey hey hey, great job on the poem, man! It truly does describe the awesome emotions that music inspires in us! Whether it's rockin out at a KISS concert, or listening to someone's retake of Beethoven's Fur Elise, or even jammin out in a disco hotspot, people all around the world can understand and connect through music! When you're there in the middle of it all, you don't simply sit and listen. You kind of join in with the music, and you really start to feel it more acutely. I oughta know, cause i play three instruments myself! Thank you for sharing this with us here at writing.com, and keep up the good work!
Awesome short story, Bro! You did a really good job with the intro to the story! It wasn't so clear that the reader instantly knew what was going on, but it wasn't so vague that they left because they didn't understand it at all. This was a well convoluted plot! You really fit everything that would catch my interest in a few paragraphs, and now I'm looking forward to reading book two! Thank you for sharing your work here on writing.com, and keep up the good work!
Just... Just...wow. This is one of the most realistic stories I've ever read about the life of a Nazi German soldier. You did a wonderful job portraying his emotions, his feelings, and his dedication to his Leader. You did an awesome job portraying the feelings of a Jewish girl, in the middle of Nazi Germany and surrounded by people who had wronged her for absolutely no reason, and the entire thing flowed together like you wouldn't believe. I would honestly recommend that you try and publish this as a short story! Great job! Keep up the good work!
I feel so bad for him haha! That really makes me wonder though, if the humans were giants, what would all of these races that he subjugated or demolished look like next to a normal guy? Really good job with this, though. Every day I am impressed by the ingenuity, creativity, and wit that I see on this site. Your story made my day. Keep up the good work!
Love it! This is a really good piece of work! I love how you portrayed the sulan as someone just trying to live a normal life! I would never have guessed that he was not a human being. Anyways, if you write any more stories like this, I would totally be interested in finding out! Keep up the good work!
This is a pretty nice poem, man! The rhythm flows really pretty well, I see no partial rhymes, and it portrays a message very clearly. I very much like the line about pictures being able to lie, cause it's true! I pulled that on my brother the other day. Keep up the good work!
That was a really cool story! Mind you, I felt really bad for the unfortunate villagers! I do like how you include the fact that the dragon is really giving people a chance (in her opinion!) That's a pretty awesome villager that knows the answer to riddles like that under pressure... anyways, keep up the good work! (Good job with the riddles, too!)
Hey hey hey bro, I'm loving your poem here! I really like how it likens to the christmas spirit right now, but i think that something like this can apply for every part of the year, holidays or not. We would all appreciate a good deed done for us, so give someone else the chance to appreciate that feeling. Keep up the good work!
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.14 seconds at 6:29pm on Dec 22, 2024 via server WEBX2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
My review has been submitted for consideration in "