As a fellow gamer myself, I am interested in learning more about this subject as well. As you have stated in your essay, many studies have been researched about how violent video games affect aggression. Video games these days seem to focus on violence, but there are plenty of video games that do not focus on this aspect. You made some very good points in your essay, it was interesting to hear your point of view on this highly controversial topic.
One bit of advice that I can give you is support more of your argument. For one, I could see your argument being made, but some more evidence would have further supported your argument. For example, when stating that video games are not the only factors of aggression, an explanation of some other factors could have further supported your stance.
All in all the essay was very interesting. The topic of violent video games making people more aggressive has been debated for several decades. It will be interesting to see in the future if any other studies will produce results showing more information on this subject!
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