MzSnowleopard's (mzsnowleopard) Reviews

MzSnowleopard

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#4475669

Review of Kitty Kitten

Review by MzSnowleopard

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Kittens are absolutely wonderful and wondrous, aren't they? I love how this poem depicts a kitten curious about the world. And the picture is a purrfect fit. Well done.

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#4466340

Review of Dear Me: Official WDC Contest

Review by MzSnowleopard

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I think that this is a great idea, even if you don't or didn't enter the contest. As writers we should be doing all we can to encourage ourselves, to inspire, and uplift our own spirits. Who better to understand US than ourselves?

Thank you Story Mistress for this idea, and making it a contest to boot. Some people feel the need to have that extra oomph to get things done. It's that challenging, that competitive spirit in them. They have to have it.

I am not such a person. I could list a few reason but as the saying goes one person's reason is another person's excuse. So I linger in the shadows, lurking, watching to see what comes up. I am after all curious and love to see what's produced.

I have read the description of many contests and challenges. A lot of them have been thought provoking. This one is inspiring. I was reminded of this letter I once wrote to myself from the perspective of a primary character. I run across it now and then and read through it. To this day I hear Lynn's voice, not mine, in those words of encouragement.

IMO - people should give this a try whether they shoot for a contest or not.

Thanks Mistress,
for the site, the words, and all you do.

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#4464732

Review of Just Me

Review by MzSnowleopard

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Reggie,

I like this. It's simple.

Your poem invoked a lot of memories for me. I was the 3rd of 3 kids adopted by my Grandparents. This poem reflects how I felt growing up. I felt like I was one child too many, the extra mouth. And my sister was the important one, the wanted one. To see your words makes me feel that I wasn't alone. I wasn't the only one who felt this way.

Thank you for sharing this. keep writing, keep sharing.
I look forward to reading more from you.

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#4024516

Review of How to Write a Query Letter

Review by MzSnowleopard

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Thank you for sharing this. The content is informative, helpful, and concise. As some one who is about to write her first query letter, I'm grateful for this being here.

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#3946909

Review of My time with Hannah.

Review by MzSnowleopard

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

This is a heartwarming story. It does need some more details. What breed of parrot is Hannah? What kind is Toeksie? Some anecdotes of their interactions would help. What was their best day together and or their worst?

The only "oops" I saw was the date you returned hannah "11/01/2014". Did you mean 2013?

Just y 2 cents

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#3944162

Review of Name sig

Review by MzSnowleopard

Rated: E

| (4.0)

LOL awe, that's adorbale