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Review of Befores & Afters  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I lived through all that too. Thanks for your memories. They are much like mine. Kathleen

(Also, I can tell you have written professionally!)
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Enjoyed reading your choices. I like to include the "bad girls" too: Rahab, a Canaanite prostitute who helped the Israelites conquer Jericho, and Bathsheba, the woman whose husband King David had killed so he could have her for himself.

The thing I like most about these two women? They are in the lineage of Jesus!
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Review of Tomorrow  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
So true.

Best of Luck!

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
" but instead of criticizing, they helped me" And thank God for those encouragers! I depend on avid readers to evaluate my work because they know good writing from bad. Other writers often just tell you how they would have written it.

Reading or watching programs by writers I admired was a great help too.

Keep at it - if only for your own pleasure!

Kathleen
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Review of Blue River  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
Lovely thoughts. Hard to read without capitals and punctuation and poetry line spacing. It could be so much more impactful.
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I so agree. Usually when I see a movie version of a book I liked, I leave the theater saying, "The Book Was Better."

I remember leaving the theater after seeing "Gone Girl". People were saying they couldn't believe how the movie ended. Many of us said, "You should have read the book!" It was a decent adaptation, but the shock value of the book ending was hard to reproduce.
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow. This poem is full of great images. Looking forward to more from you. Kathleen
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Review of SON  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
My oldest is now 45. You took me back to day one. Thank you. Kathleen
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Review of Peace At A Price  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
HOOAH!
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You had me at "I was in Penn Station . . . " Love the way you used the page layout to pace your story. Sometimes the briefest of encounters make the strongest impact.

Looking forward to more from you.

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
Steve: This www address doesn't lead to a website. Help? Kathleen
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Review of Sadly  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful. The situation in which most of us writers find ourselves.

"Oh to fuel my creativity from the ashes of frustration." Best line not even in the piece.

Don't know where you are in the writing process. I started as a poet at 16. At 71 I'm working on my ninth book - fifth novel. The money I've made is miniscule, but the rewards are innumerable.

Best of luck, Kathleen
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Review of Not My Body  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Powerful. Fiction, I hope. But I know too well this is reality for too many women. Only hope those who need to see a way out get the chance to read this work.

Kathleen
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Review of persona  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Powerful.

Kathleen
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Review of Rough Draft (Duh)  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I felt this way for years. Becoming a newspaper reporter helped me get over my fear of writing something, putting my name on it, and publishing it.

Eventually that confidence made its way to my novel writing. I'm glad I got over it in time to hear my Mom introduce me to her friends as "My daughter, the writer". I almost waited too long. Don't.

Kathleeen
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Review of More Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a gift to be given.
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Review of Star  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
How beautiful. I'm amazed at those who write lyrics and poetry that could be set to music.

My own poetry doesn't have that kind of depth.

Looking forward to more from you. Kathleen
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Review of Bitter  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow. We've all been there but you summed it up so well! Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
What a great idea!

I'm strolling through your portfolio and enjoying myself.

Don't want to be too self-promoting, but from what I see of your interests I wonder if you'd enjoy one of my novels? Unintended Consequences - Wallis & Edward

I am fascinated with British Monarchy across the centuries. I'm amazed at by the simply consequence of birth you can be flung into such a complicated dynasty.

If you are interested, I'd be happy to send you a copy. I'm not about making money off my friends.

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. You said a lot here. Wow. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Such important information. Thanks, Kathleen
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Review of Breath  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love when so much is expressed in so few words. Beautiful. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow . . . I have soooooo been there. Please learn (if you haven't already) it was about them - not you.

Easy to say, I know. Kathleen
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Review of July 14/1962  Open in new Window.
Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Bless your heart. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting speculation. People always are so sure things could never happen in America - until they do.

I'm a member of your generation. Could we ever imagine a Trump presidency or a January 6th?

Kathleen
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