Hey Michelle!
Thank You for sharing this poem
OVERALL THOUGHTS: This is a very, very well done piece. Your questions are questions that so many people in this world face when in a relationship, especially one that has existed for so long.
BEST PARTS: "To ignore a love that has been dormant for years? An electric current that continues to hurt". I love this line because even when we ignore a love that has lasted so long, it is still there and hurting. It hurts because all love can cause pain, especially when you purposely try to disregard it.
"When distant hearts meet they are still not complete" is also a fantastic line. I believe it means when two people fall in love, they are not completed by said love. We are taught by disney and other things that once you find love, you are complete...but that is certainly not the case at all. Or at least, i think people need something else going for them in their lives haha.
SUGGESTIONS: "The passion is there but the reasoning gone" is only slightly awkward at the words "reasoning gone", though that is probably just me. Maybe "reasoning
is gone" or "reasoning--gone". Personally i prefer the later. Even without this your poem shines.
Once again, Fantastic job!
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