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Review of Come With Me  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed the start of this peice, using the words "cry", and "tear" something we can all relate to. "I am here to hold you" to me this says I am here to protect you, and after that you added "come underneath me wings" this expression to me is to teach someone something, thus to me this is as if saying "I will protect you, and teach you how to protect yourself" This could possibly be used to describe an angel due to the next sentance "I'll carry you to the safest place to take all that pain away," maybe as in a heaven. The next sentance tells me that life is temperary, and that you lived it knowing the dangers of it. "Don't blame yourself for how much pain life has caused you" to me this means in life you will feel pain, we all feel pain, its not your fault that you felt pain, pain tells you that you are alive.

The next verse tells me that there is someone out there, and they are there for you, and are waiting to help you. the next line tells me that they are there to protect you. and make me feel better. "so take my hand and wipe that tear" This tells me that only the pain will go away if i accept that protecting person. the next line tells me that that person will always be there. you say "dad" but i veiw that as a figure of speech, that is to say, a dad is an icon, or a figure that most people look up to, or admire.

I enjoyed this work, please keep up the good work. This was very pleasant for someone with depression to hear. Thank you
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