I am sorry for your friends loss. I have asthma also so I understand the great dangers it can bring to life. Keep up the good work. My prayers goes out to your friend and their family.
I can relate to this writing because I do the same thing so that others dont come up with something that isnt really what it is. Keep up the good work.
As I was reading this poem I could only think of myself on how sometimes I say a lot of things that I really didnt mean only out of anger. You did a great job in expressing that. One suggestion:
Am I writing a poetry: I was thinking, Am I writing a poem or Am I writing poetry. Just my suggestion.
Hi,
This poem touched me in many ways. For one, this poem reminds me of what I am currently feeling towards my husband. He is deployed and this poem describes just about every emotion that I am having. Anyone who has loved someone knows the feeling of wanting something to either return to you or love you back just as much as you love them.
This is a raelly good poem. I think most women can relate to it. No matter what we do or say, it still seems as if a guy doesn't know when to realize that they're causeing you pain. I have a few suggestions:
"and even then" I think 'and' should be taken out and capitalize "even"
This seems a little personal. To whom ever this is about I hope that things get better. You shouldn't spend your days crying eventhough it may be hard. As long as you know they are in your heart then they are still there with you.
This is a nice poem. I think that everyone wished they could take back certain things. It is very important to tell your loved one how you feel because you never know when they will leave. This poem is a perfect example of how we spend more times aruing about nothing when we can just say "I love you".
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