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Review by Strychnine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Scribbleeba,

This is a lovely piece, certainly a bright outlook on life. Some may think it's too positive, but we all lead different lives and think about things differently. I think it's important that we live true to ourselves. Society is often stuck in place, aiming for an unachievable goal, a dystopia that we'll never reach. We have trials that make us the people that we are today, and if you know and understand yourself, then I think you've reached the point to start reaching out your branches to flourish. I have the same thought process as you do, at least from what I've read. As far as grammar is concerned, I haven't found any errors, and I won't give you recommendations on structuring. Sometimes I receive those, and they are a headache at times. That's besides the point. You wrote a piece as colorful as your thoughts, and I admire such a thing. I'll definitely take a look at your other pieces.
Sincerely,
The one and only Strychnine

P.S. You're a star.

P.P.S. Take care.
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Review by Strychnine Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Koko,

I deeply resonated with your article. You shed light on the often-overlooked struggles of children and the unintended harm caused by parental actions.

Just because these patterns may be common or inherited from our own upbringing, it doesn't make them acceptable. Your words serve as a valuable reminder to acknowledge and break harmful cycles.

To further enhance your message, considering grammar corrections would be beneficial. Tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT can help.
Thank you for sharing your insightful perspective.

Best, Strychnine

P.S. You are a star
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