Good Heavens, I was transported back to my own high
school days.
You did a good job telling this story and you could
even enlarge the scope - maybe she gets caught burning
the forms, maybe Abby is really a relative. So many
ways to go if you want.
My girls and I love Harry Potter. We have read all the books, so far, and just saw the latest movie the
other night.
Even though we have the new book coming next week, I
will be out of town. But, since my eyesight is failing, I can only read a few chapters at a time unless it is in large print.
It's really sad that this is the last book, everyone
is going to miss them.
As for your book, do you have any more chapters ready
to read???
I just finished reading your BIO and it is a wonderful
story of how life used to be. I too was raised in a
small town and my experiences are much like yours.
I really miss that life style, my children got to live
it, they were born in 1959 and 1960, but, being in their 40's now, they are very much part of the "new"
way of living. "More & better" is their usual goal.
There are times of wonderful memories and they too
complain of how fast life is today.
I just wanted to thank you for writing this and waking up my wonderful memories.
This story is very interesting, an insight into a man's mind, his feeling.
I really believe men over-think their deepest emotions. Men feel scared out of their minds when
they really care for a woman, but, the majority just
can NOT express themselves.
I have just tried my hand at writing by doing a short
story (very short)about a rabbit named Whiskers. If
you have time perhaps you'll give me your opinion.
The story of your Grandmother really broke my heart. I too had a Grandmother who went through a similar
experience. Unfortunally, I live in Georgia and she
lived in West Virginia, so I did not get a chance
to say my goodbyes.
You have done a beautiful story, even if it did make
me cry. Keep up the great work.
This is a really good story, you could actually make
a sequel, or, part two and keep on with Bullet as he
leaves town and what happens to him next. After all,
one of his former crooks is still alive and could do
a lot of damage.
Richard, this is going to be a great story when you get it finished.
Doing a historical type of story is very tricky. You
have to be very careful of your facts, places, etc.
There will always be those who will tell you all that
you got wrong.
The one I really picked up on is the letter writing.
My ancestors came from Ireland back in the 1700's.
The women could not write, the reading they did was
the Bible. They were for having many babies, keeping
house and planting a garden.
Other than that, keep up the good work, it is a
really interesting story.
This is a riviting story of the failure of the police,
who are supposed to be unbiased and fair, to really do
their job and investigate, investigate.
That poor woman was abused by the system but she has
managed to survive and rewrite her book/screenplay and
make a fortune. Good for her. Payback is a bitch and
she earned the right to thumb her nose at them all.
Keep up the great work.
Granny
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