This poem is really cool. I really enjoyed reading it. This poem had a story line about a mouse and what happened to it when the mouse refused to leave. The person who the mouse refused to leave decided to use the mouse to help that person's purposes. I am not an expert on poems. My mother while she was alive used to read poems in church. I have learned to appreciate the average poem. Some I have enjoyed over the years.
This poem was the first of it's kind that I have ever seen. I do love to eat Campbell's tomato soup. I sure love it when there is some sort of pasta in the soup. Some other times vegetables in the soup makes it taste just right. This is a pretty cool poem. I would not change anything with this piece.
This story really caught my interest. I can relate to this story because I get my characters in real life by watching people. I can put myself into the story. I do like how the author leads the reader bit by bit was the reader is lead along reading as fast as the reader can to find out what was going to happen next.
I can not think of any improvemenst. I am looking forward to the rest of the book. This is truely going to be a page turner. I will buy a copy of this book.
At first I was a little shocked to read about a guy who dressed like a woman for his job. But then, I realized that this was a job which he felt comfortable doing. To many people, their job is what defines who they are. This seems to be important especially to us males. I am a nurse's aide and a taxi driver. This defines who I am as a person. So I can understand why the character feels that he does not care what people feel about him dressing like a woman while doing his show for his job. It makes him feel completed and full filled in his life. This is what a job should do for a person in real life. So this was not a bad read after all.
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