Wow! Taking another person's rage and abuse is brave, upset that you could do nothing at the time or didn't do anything at the time because you did not want to get hurt. Loved the description and felt the rage in this poem and hope with the end that the other person feels your wrath someday because they seem deserving of it. Enjoyed it!
Beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes and wondering if there's a phone out there that'll connect me to my dog. I know that sounds silly, but I miss him and the idea of this toy phone is brilliant. You have to wonder who little kids are talking to on those plastic things, it's cute. Loved the story quality to it and loved the joy it brought to those kids in their time of need. Magic still exists! Excellent job!
Now this is an excellent piece and there should be more people out there with an open mind to everyone. As the old saying goes to never judge a book by its cover and I like how you portray that as well as the part the everyone is different. We are and if we weren't than life would be boring. My theory is this not everyone acts like a stereotype so don't judge everyone by it, people are people no matter what they look like or who they are, everyone should be treated fairly. The other reason I love this poem and how it sends a good message, is that I can relate to this poem because I was never popular and never wanted to be. I am who I am, and if you don't like me then fine just go away and leave me be. Wonderful job!!
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