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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh goodness. I want to take that little boy and love all of the sadness from his timid heart. This one really touches me. So sweet. Shancy.
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Review of Elvis?  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is great. I love how you put it in with the story. Shancy.
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Review of Paradise Lost  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I just love this. I hate to see something old and familiar changed in the name of progress. It is a fettish of mine, therefore I really appreciate this poem. Also, I would like to complement your flawless rhyming scheme. This one's a winner! Shancy.
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Review of Garden Disaster  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really love the message here. I love the way you executed it in rhyming style. There are some fresh twists on a story we've known for years. I enjoyed this very much and couldn't find anything really that I would change. Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem filled with irony is very thought provoking and interesting. A lesson learned.... I enjoyed. Thank you much for sharing. Shancy.
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Review of Gathering Clouds  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is not only a beautifully sentimental piece that I could share with the author but the rhyming was fun to read. There was only one weak spot and a couple of words that didn't rhyme in exact but altogether this was like taking in a long, deep breath of mountain fresh air. I enjoyed. Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
LOL. This was much fun. I just love these things. They lighten my day and your madlib is no exception. Thanks for sharing. Shancy.
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Review of Fairy Tale Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is nice and calming. It is a good view on the subject of love. You are right, we all want a fairy tale love. I wouldn't change anything on this. Shancy.
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Review of Child of mine  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, I feel the same way about my four who are mostly gone. You've rather said it all here. If I were to offer any advice it would just be to work on form. Your poem is kind of all over the place, though what it says really touches the heart. Hope I've been of some help. Shancy.
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Review of Only Yesterday  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is just precious! You've done a great job getting inside the emotions of a cat. I love it. Great writing, my friend. shancy.
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Review of Melos  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! You're sure to be a success with great writing like this. This is just great! Bravo! I did so enjoy the twist. There is one mistake you may want to fix. "Shaft" is typed with the "S" left off. Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this one a lot because all of the descriptions remind me of an acid trip I took the night my parents found out I did drugs. If I hadn't been on that cool acid trip it would have been a really bad scene for me. Your descriptions are great.
They aren't really metaphors so much as descriptions.
A great read. LOL Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This poem has some very good lines. It would read better, however, with correct spelling and punctuation. After all, that is REAL poetry. Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very much fun. A good idea for a madlib. I could have used better choices but I enjoyed it, anyway. Shancy.
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Review of Going Home  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Bravo! A well-written wonderful but sad story. I loved every word of it. I just lost my dad two years ago, seems like yesterday. There is great depth to this story. Something for everyone to get something out of. Again, I really enjoyed it. Shancy.
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Review of To My Mom  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so touching. It is wonderful that you are there for your mother when others would have turned away or been ashamed. I like your poem. I think the rhyming could have used a little more thought but it's a nice poem. Shancy.
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Review of Last Ride In 1959  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good job for so few words. It makes a good point, as well. Thank you for sharing. Shancy.
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Review of Fishing Buddies  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is the least likely fish tale I was expecting. LOL. It is very well written and makes for a touching love story. I love to fish. I'm sorry no one caught anything but the love bug! LOL. It is charming.

PS Thank you for the corrections on my story, which I've fixed. The answer to your question is "no" I don't intend on going any further with "A Mother's Concern." Shancy.
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Review of 1941  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, long or not, this was certainly a very creative madlib. I enjoyed reading every word. You have a wonderful imagination. Too bad my choice of words sucked. LOL Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I understand the white man coming and destroying. What I don't understand is wasn't there enough land for the red man and the white man? Many red men did their part in savagely murdering and scalping the white women and children. My great grandmother was full Cherokee. My other great grandmother was full Irish. So where do I stand? I stand for peace. I'm glad I read this. The rhythm is off a bit but the story is great. Shancy.
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Review of A Dog Story  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh my gosh but you are incredible!!!!! I dearly loved this. Probably because I live mostly alone with my miniature dachshund who thinks he's ten feet tall! LOL. I could picture this as I read every word. You have a great style. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. I welcome you to try some of mine. Though not nearly as humorous. Shancy.
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Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
There is a lot of wisdom in this. Things are not always what they seem. The Bible speaks of angels coming to the earth to our doors looking perhaps poor and needy to see what our reaction will be. We should always try to be kind. Often, it's easier to be kind to strangers than our own family. You might want to correct the word "and" in the next to last line to "an." I really enjoyed this sweet poem. Thanks for the reminder to be kind to all! Shancy.
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Review of i'm sorry  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I sympathize with your emotions in this work. You might want to read it for spelling errors and I feel the third from last and the last line contradict one another. Perhaps I just am not getting what you're saying here. I've been in relationships like this before. It is very painful. I wish you the best. Shancy.
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Review of One strange day  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh boy. I made a mess out of this one but it has some really funny parts. The madlib name caught my attention, thought it would be a hoot. I wasn't wrong.
Great job. Shancy.
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Review of I Lost My Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Shancy Fayre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is wonderful! What a great way to be, if only we could. Your rhyming scheme was great, the rhythm, too.
There is one detail that should be corrected for the sake of good grammar: "laying on the floor" should by "lying." I always remember it because one of my teachers said chickens lay, people lie. LOL I love the feeling this poem gave me. Also, thank you so much for your review and great rate and helpful comments on my poetry. I'm not real good with commas.
I thought I had it right but it seems everyone has a different idea. Anyway, bless you. Shancy.
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