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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm no poet but feel strongly about my impressions of this work of art. Maybe most would catch on to your symbolisms, I don't know, but I found your words very hopeful and uplifting. It's very beautiful in my opinion and worthy of any and all the praise that comes its' way. Thank you for brightening an otherwise ho-hum day. I think you're a talented poet...keep it up. Best Wishes, Lilee
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I can relate. "A poem worth a thousand memories". Good job.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good description of clinical depression and probably panic disorder. You're very brave and obviously only wanted for yourself what should have been yours from the beginning anyway. I can relate to what you're saying for since childhood I have suffered with major depressive disorder, dissociative disorder, borderline personality disorder and severe anxiety and panic attacks. I feel a kinship to you for I feel we've probably had similar experiences in battling this unrelenting curse. You did a really good job of describing these illnesses with so few words. You know you could go on for days describing the symptoms. I think you are a good writer , making the most of time and space and writing in a clear, easy to read fashion. I think you are capable of writing a fine autobiography that would attract many readers.
Good luck to you and please keep writing
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is the description of probably too many relationships and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. You write in a way that held my attention throughout. I can feel the depression in your words. Good job.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good. Makes me want to know more. Easy to read and understand and interesting. Good Luck with your future.
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Review of A Soundless Cry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked the way you described something I can relate to very well, Good work! Keep on writing, Good Luck...
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Review of What is not  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I think this could have been boring had you not written it in the style or way that you did. Nothing much happens except the girls thought processes which are - to me - interesting. I got to know her as a real character, a loner and depressed. Her analysis of her moment to moment existence has become her life. She is neither good or bad OR she is both which seems here to mean the same thing so it doesn;t really matter to her.
This took, I think a good imagination and a good sense of " playfulness". I noticed a few typos but enjoyed reading it. Good Luck.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting and very descriptive. I for one would like to read the rest of the story. I like that the intuitive dog is with her and I have a feeling a lot more happenings are in store for them both. I like the setting -- spooky and mysterious. Good luck, Keep on keeping on.
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Review of My Psalm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good and touching. You know I'm no critic but I liked it!
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Review of Drowning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This sparked my interest. What could have happened to bring Brooklyn so low? A love affair gone bad, maybe, or even the death of a loved one or a gut-wrenching betrayal by a friend? Would like to know more. I think it's a good piece, tho I'm no critic. Keep writing.
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Review of In Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Mysterious and captivating and then shocking. I feel you did an excellent job of hiding the truth until exactly the right moment witha smoothness that takes the reader aback at first and then fits like the hand in the glove.
Keep up the good work. Lilee
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