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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think it was a great story. I found the plot line involving, if not really believable (I think in real life a surgeon would know it is illegal to forcibly graft fake boobs to a boys chest). However, I found it entertaining and I felt I could get into the psychology of the boys and the mother very well. I only have a few complaints. Firstly, I find it kind of creepy for a twelve year old to have C cups and a seven year old to have D cup breasts. Moreover, the dialogue was a tad blunt in a few areas. Otherwise, I found it a fun story and eagerly await a new installment.
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