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#3888618

Review of Hurt me

Review by kymee

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

I really like this poem. I am glad that you are free. Sometimes we must go through a tremendous amount of pain to be free, but it's all worth it in the end

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#3888615

Review of secrets

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Secrets aren't good and can eat you up alive. Good topic and good work

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#3823942

Review of A Confession

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I thought the poem was good. It took me back at first as to what it all meant.

I liked the ending the word Hello. Sometimes that's all it takes to reconnect, to hear someone's voice we longed to hear.

Sometimes hello can also mean goodbye.

Keep up the good work.

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#3817563

Review of Soldier's Song

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hello bscholl

After reading "The Cosmic Masquerade Ball" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very special and heartfelt poem.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. A soldiers days are difficult, but you put the right words in the right places. Good imagery your portrayed here. Keep up the good work

RATING:5.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3817556

Review of A Poem Of Love

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Hello Sticktalker

After reading "A Poem Of Love" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very simple, yet to the point poem. The ending is very about love.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: One extra space between hunting and dog.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Liked your cover and the simplicity of the poem. Good meaning. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3791804

Review of Love

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Hello Sticktalker

After reading "Invalid Item" I have the following comments to offer:

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OVERALL IMPRESSION: Very unique.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked how the background is blurred out putting all the emphasis on the word love. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3791448

Review of My Memories

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Capitalize will on third stanza. Nice love poem. Some of the sentences were a little bumpy, but I liked it was a great story

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#3780851

Review of Veiled

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello {user:Poppy Moss}

After reading "Veiled" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem. Short, but beautiful. It is so true about aging. I am getting up their in age and I can already relate to the experience of some of what you said.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the poem a lot. A good read for anyone at any age. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3767852

Review of Broken

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hello Adrianna

After reading "Broken" I have the following comments to offer:

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OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique and deep poem. Understood it as it go to the end.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Great imagery. Keep up the good work

RATING:5.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3755449

Review of Blue Moon (haiku 5-7-5)

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Good. I like it

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#3713752

Review of His Hand in Mine

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello {user:Color Me Connieann's

After reading {item:1539417I have the following comments to offer:

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OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem about not having a father.

SUGGESTIONS: Take so out of the 5th stanza and no capital letter on dad.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I The ending especially His hand held in mine

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3713751

Review of Peace

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello {user:Color Me Connieann's

After reading {item:1459393I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem. Short, but gets the message across.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Really like the imagery your portrayed here. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3713748

Review of A Piece of My Heart

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello {user:Color Me Connieann}

After reading {item:1459393I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: I liked the poem it spoke from the heart. I'm sorry for your loss.

SUGGESTIONS: Take out had in the 7th stanza, 3rd line.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: Tears and heart don't rhyme in the 6th stanza.

WHAT I LIKED: The subject, the element of surprise and the love.

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3705225

Review of Burning Away

Review by kymee

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

The only comment I have beside, I understand is that alive and night do not match if you're trying to do rhyme. But keep up the good job and keep writing

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#3705224

Review of My Angel

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I'm sorry for your loss. Keep writing it will help

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#3695347

Review of My Calling

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (3.5)

And I hope you, the poet does very well. Keep up the good work. :)

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#3693061

Review of Freedom's Key

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello {user:WhoMe???}

After reading {item:1411743I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very true poem. Caused me to think and ask questions.

SUGGESTIONS: Line 14 take out even.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: Line 13 can not is one word.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem. It gave a message about freedom and obtaining and securing it. Interesting subject and great rhyming.

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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#3693019

Review of Solitude

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Good poem. A few suggestions though. Bear should be BARE then put a period after that, Take out even before care, take out always before be, take out just before me. It make the poem flow better together. Keep writing

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#3688451

Review of When whispering my name.

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Really like this. It it is so true. :)

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#3679760

Review of Dear Dad!

Review by kymee

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I really like this poem coming from a different point of view. This should be some healing for you by writing this out. Best of luck

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#3678524

Review of My Mother's Hand

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.0)

great poem. 4th line should be learned. 5th line same.

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#3678513

Review of Now You're Gone

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I really like the ending. A very sad poem.

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#3674044

Review of Faces

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Nice poem. keep up the good work

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#3659471

Review of Acceptance

Review by kymee

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Acceptance is hard but is a step towards healing the heart and the soul. I like to the levels angels fly. Very good poem

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#3656018

Review of Isolated

Review by kymee

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

You might want to change the rating to 18. Fourth stanza, first line, should he should be he's. The last two lines don't make sense or you could elaborate on it. Keep writing.