Wow this is absolutely beautiful! The wording, the way it flows, and just wow! I really enjoyed and love this poem and I am not a big fan of poetry. I also liked the way it was written out, I feel it makes it flow even better. I found it also moving and thoughtful. 5 stars.
Cool concept. It makes me really curious about the other side of the library and is it a mirror world? Where everything is like ours but the opposite? So things would be evil and twisted? This curiosity helped me stay interested in the story and keep reading. Not the biggest fan of how it was written. The writing style felt weird to me, at times I almost read it as a nursery rhyme but that might be from all the poetry I've been reading lately that has a lot of rhyming in it. Either way I found the plot fascinating and would love to hear about the "other side"
I actually really like this. The first thing that came to mind was the idea that we humans most almost put on a show and hide our inner selves. And how everyone merely sees the surface and not what lies beneath. It is a short sweet to the point poem and I'm not really into poetry but I liked it. 5 stars.
I find this curious in what you are meaning in the poem. For instance what do you mean Madam's device? It makes me think believe it or not of a woman's vagina. Are you implying that sex is something sinful? I am probably completely off here but I am honestly just curious what you mean by this. However, the writing kept me interested. It actually reminded me of a prayer that one would hear in a church. I'm not one for over religious things but just the way this flowed and reminded me of a pray was really good and made me enjoy it.
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