This was a nice poem, albeit a bit crudely written, but nonetheless great. I think the theme was great, and it was sweet and to the point. Obviously, the poet has experienced heartbreak and is exasperated to try and refigure things into what they once were, but is unable to do so. It's great!
I love the initial use of colors in this story, and how this usage of colors slowly morphs into a list of emotions. It's simply beautiful, and excellently written. The shapes, emotions, colors, and simple things that we know are able to be constructed into something so wonderful. You are a great writer, and this is quite a nice tale. I can imagine each portion of the text as I read it, and it was beautiful. I could essentially imagine that photograph, and you really wrote it with an excellent blend of figurative language. Nice job!
Wow, this was amazing. Hum tora sa Hindi bolsakte hai, lekein itna ucha shabd hum kabhi nehi likh saktehai. Kya emotions tum capture kiye ho, aur itna ucha likawhat mein.
You are a wonderful poet, and I think this is a great poem! Nice job! I really think its beautiful and it is truly about umeed. Nice job!
Oh my gosh, haha, I really enjoyed this poem. It's been a year and two months since I deactivated my Facebook, and I know how much of a difference it's made in my life. People become so preoccupied with this online phenomena that they begin to lose touch with things that really matter--health, recreation, and so forth. Instead, we do set ourselves up for this existence full of drudgery and elusive happiness, as if it's an addiction that cannot be cured. I really think this is a remarkable depiction of the Facebook Disorder.
This is incredible. You capture so many emotions and you're completely right. The entire situation is a horrible escalation of hate, and the fact this will propel a cycle of violence and further hatred is simply a thought that belongs in our nightmares. I think you accurately described the emotions that are present in this situation, and I really think that you are a great poet. Nice job. And I hope this situation truly becomes resolved with both sides settling down, and justice being served.
Signed,
Velle In Stella
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