I really liked this poem and I can see how much you cared for this person even though you didn't get the chance to know him. This is sad to hear that he is now gone, but you have made it possible for him to live forever through these words. You are a talanted writer and your words have made me want to watch this film to see who this amazing man was. Keep writing!
This is a wonderful poem! I am a poetry writer myself and I have never written one this long. Good job!!! It flows well throughout the poem, and the only problem I saw was in the 10th stanza. You must have just made the simple mistake of not pressing return in the middle of the second to last line because you introduce two rhymes in one line. I hope I make sense and if not just ask. I look forward to hearing the second half of this poem!!! Keep up the great work!
Ok... you definately had me stumped. I did not think I would only get 3 out of 10! Oh well. Good test! Makes me want to go back and watch the series again. I have seen many Sailor Moon episodes but I have not seen them all! You are talented to be able to pick out these details! Keep up the good work!!!
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