Wow! This is a complicated ryhme scheme to accomplish, but you did it beautifully! This was so lovely, it makes me think of Christ walking in a green
garden, peacefully and lovingly talking to me. A very tranquil poem.
Thanks for sharing it!
As someone who has daily aches and pains, this is comforting.
This was well-written, careful footnotes were a pleasure to read, and I'm not a great reader!
I used to think God sent sickness to test us, but if the Spirit of God is in us, it cannot co-exist with Sickness and evil, so thanks for clearing that up.
Wonderful read, very inspiring and it sends a hopeful and educated message.
thanks for writing this!
Once again, I am captivated by your ability to locate a verse and use it in parable form! How very "Jewish" of you! Just as Jesus spoke in parables, I see you do often as well. Being an car buff, I found this "right up my alley", forgive the pun. In all seriousness, the subject was one we all should identify with, ands you made it user-friendly and fun to read. I liked the format of the Bible verses being in bold print, it makes it easy to reference them and shows respect as well. Thanks for "revving" up my faith with this great piece.
Have A great Day!
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