You know, i actually thought this was genuine at first. I had to check you bio just to make sure. The fact i thought it was genuine says it all.
The writing is smooth and consistant, if it wasn't for the title it would be a beautifully laid trap in a sense. The first paragraph had me wondering what this was all about, it didn't feel overbearing, which it a good thing as if might have put me off, but had me lured into her situation and opinion by the second paragraph without fully realizing it, marvalous!
Once i finished reading it, the Pslam verse 139:9-10 suddenly made sense. I like things like that. Overall it was neither too short or too long.
Though i don't usually read things like this, I honestly would say if there was anything at all i didn't like about this, but really there isn't anything substanial i don't like about this, top marks.
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